ok, a little short i pumped out for the
'Unreliable Narrator' workshop. I think I was supposed to do a character sketch, but oops, all this spilled out.
I have a very clear idea of Emilie and what's happening with her, but I'm interested to see what you think is happening with her.
Crit for tWR: [link]
So, Crit Questions:
What do you think is the deal with Emilie?
What did you feel happened at the end there?
does this fit your description of an unreliable narrator, why or why not?
grammar shiz: Anything off, clunky, or grammatically incorrect?
Big ups to
for helping me slug through this one.
EDIT: June 2012, made some edits, retooled the beginning, or rather, rearranged things. Hopefully cleaned up the punctuation but I probably need a little more help with that.